Athletics

Its a nice hot day today but there's no time for relaxing at home ." Bang"! I can already hear the clappers in my mind. Owww...........what people will say when I knock over the bar for high jump.

We finally get to the track and all I concentrate on is how big that mat is for high jump because I think high jump is my strongest point for Athletics and this is the active I want to say I did that I jump over that bar.

We sit down and MR Mc starts to talk BLA bla bla bla bla..... that's all I hear because I just want to get on with it. Anyway! 9 year olds arrive at the big mat. We get split into to groups because we a great big group. Boys on one side girls on the other. Heaps of people pass now its my turn. The bar is only at 90cm but that's still high because the mats about 15cm so the bar is at 1meter 5. This is what we've been practicing at school but this seems higher.

I run so fast that I nearly fall over. I jump I hope a didn't knock the bar over. Everything looked smudge like an art piece my leando devinci but from an ants point of view. "MOVE I hear TC say but more politer that I just said . The bar Its up. I was so happy but I was more happy about that know other girls made it. I think I the best!

''Sara I hope your my T.PS," Sophie said
"Yeah because maybe some people want to get there
friends you know she said really loud even
though she was right next to TC!
"I feel I little dizzy," Sara said
" So get a drink......... but before I could finish my sentence
she had fainted right in front of my face a cant believe it
right in front of my face WOW!!!!!

Outstanding first PI, Sophie. You have a lot of knowledge of your topic and you shared it in a really interesting way with us. I've never known of, or been interested in hotrods, but now I am! Now I can see why people get so interested in them. I like the way your slide pictures were automatic. My suggestion for improvement is that you work on speaking clearly and more slowly and with more volume. Fantastic work, Sophie. TC
that was a great P.I. You put a lot of time and effort. Your dad's hot rod was awesome!!!!!!!!!!! Hadley,Corbin,Alan and Caleb
Thanks Sophie for showing us your dads car. It was a brilliant presentation. Plus we loved the car!!! Oliver, Harrison, Chaz
your P.I was awsome all the cars you shared with us was awsome and WHAT A GOOD CHOICE and your dads hotrod was awsome congrats sophie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! caelum,mike,kale
We really enjoyed your PI and all the detail you put in! Next time though speak a bit more clearly and louder, But anyway cool Hotrod and great PI! Lucy, Maddy, Grace, Zia
maybe you should try shrotning it.speak a bit louder, but your dads hot rod was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aidan, Thomas
i think sophie did well because she spoke clearly and her dad even brought his car!!! I think sophie did well because her dad brought his car and the car was AWESOME. Hannah, Linda , Emma and natalya
We thought that was so cool! We really liked how you got your dad to come in and show us the hot rod! Nat,Kelly,Libby,kate and britt
we really enjoyed your p.i because you showed us a real hot rood and you gave us lots of infermation!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sara,Alana
My self assessment
I think i could do better by speaking clearly and doing
more pictures on a power point to make
the our dense more interest in the power point.

free writting

free writting

Christchurch earthquake I'm sure you have heard of it
my mums boyfriends brother and his wife live in
Christchurch
and the other day they brought a big flat screen TV.
When the earthquake happened there TV feel
off the shelf and broke. There house wasn't
damaged as like every other houses in Christchurch
but there house wasnt perfect . The earthquake measured up to 7.4 on the scale WOW!!!!!
they also had heaps of after shocks. They had one when the news was interviewing a man.
by Sophie

My sparked up writing

W.A.L.T:make tired writing come to life

my friends and me were playing a game of ball tag
and i was in.

Better piece of my writing when i have SPARKED it up

Yeah!!! Me and my idiotic friends were letting loose a game
of ball tag. The ball that we were playing with is blue bouncy
just like a ballon. I quickly ran after one of my idiodict friends because
I was in.

Show time

Show time

plan:
my favorite dance, shiny sunny colorful clothes
bold eyeliners, make up, costumes, crowd,
friends, family, smiles, not smiling, actions,whats distracting me

Story:
Yeah!! today is our amazing bright bold and beautiful show that we have taken a really long time to learn.

My special dance was our dance it was the best because of our costumes they sort of look like , shiny sunny colorful clothes.

There were over 800 people there and 1,200 eye at the most WOW!!

I felt so nervous when loud Te puawai was going on. Just when the curtain went up you could hear all the people cheering and clapping at you. It made you smile, and know that 1,200 eyes were staring at you.

I had forgot my Halloween clothes that night so i had to wear our class dance singlet that were as white as a ghost.

I knew today was the concert so I practice my very hard just to be perfect because TC said"if you make a mistake or do something silly it will stick out.

The whole show will hopefully go well.

" Guys your up" Well that was TC calling us I better scram because its our dance so see you after the show BYE!!

My time in lc13

Bang I knock down the door but not for the last. My time at riverdale school has been unbelievable in lc13 . When I walked in the smell was just great and I cant forget Tc was even great even though I hadn't meet her yet apart from in the play grounds. QUIDADGE!!! the first time me and Sara opened we didn't expect the class to be so excited about quidadge but who wouldn't be excited about quidage come on that's crazy. Its been a great year but sadly it has to come to a end for the year sixes but hopefully another year for me with TC. I loved how the classroom contacted with TC. I liked how TC took us out for heaps of games like king dodge. I loved qzealand!!!!!!!!!